Audit and revision summary (internal)

Audit findings:

- Transcript spelling/consistency: the receiving city appeared as "Latent" or "Lane" in places; corrected to "Layton" to match earlier explicit references and known local jurisdiction naming.
- Quantitative precision: transcript had "33¢ on a dollar" and inconsistent phrasing; standardized to "33% (one‑third)" and included the $500 minimum as stated.
- Speaker attribution: the transcript used the same speaker label for multiple brief roll‑call responses; the article attributes the presentation and quotes to Chief Taylor West where he was introduced by the chair and then spoke. Other brief roll‑call identifications (Brian McKenzie, Solana) were retained as first statements. "Sean" referenced in the transcript is not identified; the article attributes the drafting task to county staff per the transcript and quotes the phrase as given rather than assigning a full name or title.
- Missing data: exact staff counts and final payroll totals were not specified in the transcript; the article notes that staff will run exact calculations and returns those values as pending.

Revision actions taken: corrected Layton spelling, normalized payout language to 33% or $500, ensured quotes map to speakers in the speaker list, added clarifying details and noted where figures are estimates pending payroll calculations.